Comments on: VII – Welcome to Srynn

By: Savvy

Savvy — Fri, 07 Nov 2008 07:58:01 +0000

Very nicely done. Definitely a good edition cant wait for whats next ^_^

By: Deia

Deia — Sun, 19 Oct 2008 02:52:55 +0000

I wonder what my face will be. LOL

Very good chapter, even though I’m not awesome enough. Nice cliffhanger battle at the end, I wanna know what’s going to happen next! Don’t take too long getting it up so I can read it!

By: Fenix

Fenix — Sun, 19 Oct 2008 01:53:35 +0000

This was an awesome chapter. Worth the wait for sure. And not just for me being all badass now. Great job, Dan!

By: Seeker

Seeker — Sun, 19 Oct 2008 01:08:36 +0000

Greatest chapter yet! I laughed! I cried! I ran around the house and annoyed everyone! X3

This one was really deep, I think…

By: Scorpio

Scorpio — Sun, 19 Oct 2008 00:32:37 +0000

One major thing to say… I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Awesome addition, and I had a feeling it was Fenix who saved Deia, but you kept it suspenseful until the end.

And great job on the last part, I loved it!!

Keep up the great work!!!

By: Tailz

Tailz — Sat, 18 Oct 2008 19:13:13 +0000

FREAKING EVIL AND AWESOME. For once, I have the desire not to say that it needed more Tailz. FOR NOW.

But an excellent chapter. The plans of Tailz laid bare. The orders from the Will to Travis. The story is shaping up, and I’m loving it.

By: Panther

Panther — Sat, 18 Oct 2008 18:29:50 +0000

Loved it! Kept me at the edge of my seat the whole time!