Comments on: VIII – Faithful Fenix http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/ The Site for SPHERIC: Landing, the first work of future author Dan Hughes. Mon, 24 May 2010 05:03:11 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 By: Scorpio http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/comment-page-1/#comment-1628 Scorpio Mon, 29 Jun 2009 08:38:43 +0000 http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/#comment-1628 Loved it!!! Loved it!!!

]]> By: Tailz http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/comment-page-1/#comment-832 Tailz Sun, 26 Apr 2009 01:13:47 +0000 http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/#comment-832 ...needs more Tailz :P No, I liked it, very well done eh. …needs more Tailz :P

No, I liked it, very well done eh.

]]> By: Fenix http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/comment-page-1/#comment-731 Fenix Sun, 19 Apr 2009 02:33:04 +0000 http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/#comment-731 Nice chapter Cerb, very nice. You're outdoing yourself, that's for sure. Keep up the good work. Nice chapter Cerb, very nice. You’re outdoing yourself, that’s for sure. Keep up the good work.

]]> By: Panther http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/comment-page-1/#comment-724 Panther Sat, 18 Apr 2009 16:38:44 +0000 http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/#comment-724 So awesome, loved this chapter! So awesome, loved this chapter!

]]> By: Seeker http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/comment-page-1/#comment-711 Seeker Fri, 17 Apr 2009 19:24:13 +0000 http://spheric.starraisers.com/2009/04/16/viii-faithful-fenix/#comment-711 Great job with a bit of flashback to tell Fenix's story! I like how you used the same endings for both chapter VII and VIII. There are a few punctuation errors you may want to check on, but other thanthat, keep up the good work! Great job with a bit of flashback to tell Fenix’s story! I like how you used the same endings for both chapter VII and VIII.

There are a few punctuation errors you may want to check on, but other thanthat, keep up the good work!

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